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The other day, I was talking with a friend about the whole writing thing, and he was like, "Why would you do that to yourself?" and I was like, "Fair question. Hmm."

In the end, I could have gone on and on about all the things that make writing the Best Hobby-Dream-Mutant-Hybrid EVER, but said friend's eyes probs would have glazed over like delicious donuts. After all, it ain't clear to everyone how interrupted sleep patterns and constant obsessing can make life worth living. It takes a special breed to find fun in coming up with similes as creative as "glazed over like delicious donuts." Fo shiz!

Despite all the fun, being a writer can be stressful at times. A lot of times. You don't get the ice cream without milkin' the calf (huh?). So here are five totally weird techniques for dealing with writer-stress - and beyond!

1. Nap. Okay, so this isn't that weird - at least, for me, it's written in my DNA. But some people seem averse to the wonder that is The Nap, and if you're one of those stressed few, this needs to be remedied immediately! Take one no less than 6 hours before bedtime to prevent later insomnia, and sleep for about 20 minutes, 1.5 hours, or 3 hours. (That is sleep science, right there.)

In truth, a nap can go both ways: you can wake up with worries of queries/chapters/books seeming eons away, or your cat could wake you up too early and leave you more miserable than before. But if you ask me, it's a risk worth taking. Mmm, sleep.

2. Use flashcards. Or, you know, pieces of paper, since I know I don't always have notecards ready to be whipped out (alas, it's why I'm a horrible student). The idea here is: compartmentalize. Identify exactly what's stressing you, whether it's a plot hole, deadline, or unwanted emotion like jealousy. Then write down each thing separately. All of a sudden, instead of a giant must-not-be-named demon of angst floating over your head, each stressor is contained to a fragment of dead tree. Holla!

As you complete tasks, you can rip up the card! Or, if it's one those you-can't-really-control-it things - say, your well-meaning aunt's insistence that the process would go much more smoothly if you just self-published - limit your "worry time" to a fake notecard study session. This could even lead to your brain not caring about the material. Err, unless you were/are a good student. Gold star!

3. Take up a self-calming mantra. Like a monk! Only sexier. Anytime you feel that writer-blood pressure rising, whip out your chant. It can be short, like "I am awesome" (you are), or long, like "My percievance of this situation has been generated by my own neural passageways and will have no significant effect on the universe as a unit of space-time." Uh-huh.

4. Visualize! Imagine a snarling dog who wants to maul you. Or a cat, or a female angler fish, whatever. That animal is your writing stress. Now: tie it up to a post. With a rope made of titanium unicorn hair. There is no way that baby's getting at chya. It can only watch as you fly off on that generous unicorn into the land of inner peace. Sayonara! Hells yeah.

5. Enlist quotes. When you're stressed, the last thing you might want to hear is someone else's opinion on the subject. But the advice of old dead white men can be GREAT in this situation. Same goes for the wisdom of dead revolutionaries. And of one other person... Trust me on this one.
  • "Nothing can bring you peace but yourself." ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson (Translation: Those double chocolate fudge cookies may or may not make the query responses come faster. But oh Lord, we can try, we can try!)
  • "There is more to life than increasing its speed." ~ Mohandas K. Gandhi (Translation: 10,000 words in a day = freakin' epic! The next-day hangover = not quite as epic. Though still epic.)
  • "Peace. It does not mean to be in a place where there is no trouble, noise, or hard work. It means to be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart." ~ Lady Gaga (Translation: Gaga kicks butt, dude.)
Whoa, sorry about that last translation. How'd that get in there? Weird. The real question is... What are your offbeat techniques for dealing with writer-stress? It might be a hard-knock life, but it's the best life there is. And that is pretty much worth all the must-not-be-named demons in the world. (Besides, we've got unicorns on our side!)

~ Emilia
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Welcome to our 47th Road Trip Wednesday!

Road Trip Wednesday is a "Blog Carnival," where YA Highway's contributors post a weekly writing- or reading-related question and answer it on our own blogs. You can hop from destination to destination and get everybody's unique take on the topic.

We'd love for you to participate! Just answer the prompt on your own blog and leave a link in the comments - or, if you prefer, you can include your answer in the comments.


This Week's Topic:
What was the best book you read during the month of September?


Kaitlin: "I've been excited for this book since last September..."

Lee: "One Old and One New!"

Amanda: "a fresh and welcome difference. . ."


Kristin: "The graphic novel is haunting and complex . . ."

Kate: "True confession: I almost didn't read this book because of the cover."

Road Trip Song of the Week:


Next Week's Topic:
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Being a Good Beta

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 We've blogged about why you should do it and how it benefits your own writing. But if you've never been a beta before, you might not be sure how you do it. Depending on how well you know the writer you'll be betaing for, it's a good idea to decide on a  few things before you start.

Time Frame
Is the writer looking for feedback in the next week or two? Or are they okay waiting a month or longer? Take a glance at your own schedule and see if you'll be able to finish the MS for them in the time frame they're looking for. Of course, we all know life rarely goes as planned. If something comes up and you're taking longer than you wanted in returning the beta, just send an email to let them know you haven't forgotten.

Line Edits or General Feedback
General feedback usually means a writer is  looking for an overall feel of the book--if character arcs felt completed, if there were any plot holes, if the pacing was good throughout. Line edits (like copy edits) take a little more time and focus. Line edits usually include word choice, grammar, punctuation, paragraph breaks, out of character dialogue or thoughts, etc.

Once you know what the writer expects from your beta keep a few things in mind.

Be Consistent
Most people use the review tab in MS Word to leave comment bubbles for the document. Some people use the highlight function to indicate where they think a paragraph break should go and change font color to red for spelling errors or incomplete sentences. Whatever way you choose to beta, make sure you're consistent throughout the document.

Be Honest
Being a writer, you know how hard it can be hearing that your beautiful MS has some problems. Which might make it hard to point out things you think need improvement. But that's exactly what someone wants from a beta reader. They're looking for ways to make their work better and need your honest opinions. It's up to the writer to decide which advice to take and which to ignore. That being said, it doesn't hurt to point out things you love in the work as well.

Most, if not all writers, are simply grateful for someone to take the time to beta their book. But be professional and do a good job. When it's your MSs turn, you'll be glad you did.
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Winner: A BLUE SO DARK

Our contest for a signed copy of A Blue So Dark has ended and our winner is . . . . 

Christinabean!

Huge congrats, Christinabean! We have your email, so we'll be getting in touch to get your copy of A Blue So Dark out to you. Thanks for entering!

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Winner: Blue Fire ARC

The winner of the ARC of BLUE FIRE by Janice Hardy (signed!) is Melanie Vautour--chosen using random.org. Please email yahighway (at) gmail.com with your address so I can mail it to you. Congrats!
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The YA Graphic Novel

The graphic novel continues to see growth in readership and availability. Once relegated to comic book stores and "struggling" readers, graphic novels now serve a community of readers appreciative of the beauty of art combined with carefully sparse storytelling and can be found at mainstream bookstores, libraries and schools. What is a graphic novel? Definitions abound on the internet. For example:

1. A graphic novel is a narrative work in which the story is conveyed to the reader using comic form. The term is employed in a broad manner, encompassing non-fiction works and thematically linked short stories as well as fictional stories across a number of genres.

2. A comic book that is longer in format than the usual “pamphlet,” and typically contains a complete story unto itself. Graphic novels usually have higher production values than the typical stapled comic; ie hardcover volumes, squarebound, or dust-jacketed.

3. A square bound comic with a long, complete story. Sometimes it is a reprint of several comic books.

4. Quite simply, a novel with graphics or images. Graphic novels are much like comic books with a panel presentation and text within the image panels. Several pieces of classic literature are available as graphic novels.

Yes, Japanese manga are graphic novels, as are compilations of shorter comic books a la super hero stories. But graphic novels are more than that: they are non-fiction, they are humorous, they are gritty, they are light, they will cause a smile to break out, they will break your heart. Here are three reviews of three very different graphic novels:


YUMMY: THE LAST DAYS OF A SOUTHSIDE SHORTY by G. Neri, ill. by Randy DuBurke

review by kristin miller


Based on the life and death of Robert "Yummy" Sandifer, YUMMY: THE LAST DAYS OF A SOUTHSIDE SHORTY chronicles and questions the environment that turned the 11-year old Chicago boy into a killer. The main character, eleven year old Roger, wants to make sense of the death of Yummy and the 14-year old girl he killed. But before he can figure out the whys of Yummy's death, he has to sort through the murk of Yummy's life; of the life of his own brother, Black Disciples gang member Gary; and of the multiple tentacles of the social community and state reaching in to attempt to make things better for Yummy - and failing. The artwork is as gritty and well-done as warrants a story like this, with a fantastic noir vibe, but it's the sparse and effective text that truly broke my heart. The brilliant two page spread of "professional" opinions about Yummy, including pieces from President Clinton's speech about the murder, contrasted poignantly with the close community of friends and family trying to come to terms with how and why an 11-year old boy ends up accused of murder. And Roger's honest and oft-times confused thoughts mirrored my own. Roger doesn't come up with an easy answer because there isn't one. But readers will appreciate the various ways he questions the life and death of a boy who was both bully and victim. YUMMY is one of the most difficult and beautiful graphic novels I've seen and will linger with me for a long time.



SERENITY: THOSE LEFT BEHIND written by Joss Whedon and Brett Matthews, ill. by Will Conrad and Laura Martin

review by amanda hannah


It’s 2517 and the plant Earth, no longer able to sustain the heavy population, is but one of many different planets that have undergone terraformation to become inhabitable. Malcom Reynolds, a staunch Independent and veteran Brown Coat, defies the Alliance’s forced unification. Instead of settling onto one of the new planets and abiding by their rules, he assembles a crew aboard his ship Firefly. Somewhat directionless after the war, their only goal is to keep flying and stay out of the Alliance’s view. Their main work? Smuggling.
The novel opens with the crew in the middle of a job gone bad, and steadily getting worse. Narrowly making it back to the ship alive, Malcom is contacted by Badger. He claims the bloody Battle of Sturgis had all been started over a crate of cash—cash that’s still hidden among the wreckage. And he’s got the exact coordinates of its location. Against protests from some of his crew, Malcom calls for the coordinates to be set.
THOSE LEFT BEHIND was written to serve as a bridge between the short-lived television series, “Firefly”, and the movie, “Serenity”, that would later be released. The graphic novel perfectly captures the show’s Western flair of gun slinging and the futuristic battle of the stars. People familiar with the show will see the characters brought to life on the page with their quick, well-timed dialogue and spot on drawings.



Happyface by Stephen Emond

review by emilia plater


When awkward high school sophomore Happyface (that's his alias) has to change schools in the wake of his parents' divorce, he decides to reinvent himself as the popular, outgoing happy kid - even though he's grieving inside. What follows is a roller-coaster ride of unrequited crushes, hardball emotions, and thought-provoking themes. The story is doled out with a deft hand, accompanied by some really gorgeous drawings, hilarious doodles and comics, and IM chat sessions that reminded me like crazy of conversations I've had with my own friends. I could see this book in the hands of any guy, but even as a girl I felt like I was in Happyface's shoes. The character of Happyface is beyond endearing, someone we've all met before or have been ourselves. He's sarcastic, funny, insightful, and most importantly, real. This is a graphic novel that leaves you with a story to consider, some great art to marvel at, and a protagonist fall in love with.
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Field Trip Friday: September 24



THE BIG NEWS THIS WEEK
Wesley Scroggins, associate professor at Missouri State University, petitions for the removal of several YA books, including SPEAK and TWENTY BOY SUMMER, from his local public school. You know. The one his children don't even attend.

Anyway. A #speakloudly campaign launched on Twitter and the blogosphere exploded. There are far too many posts to link here, but the Reclusive Bibliophile did a great job of gathering them, so I'll just mention a few that grabbed my attention:
Meanwhile, don't forget: Banning happens all the time, and not just in small hill towns-- I'm Here, I'm Queer, What The Hell Do I Read? has more on the banning of a queer youth anthology in New Jersey.


THIS WEEK IN WRITING

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- How to put the "steam" in steampunk, from author Arthur Slade, guestposting at Cynsations.

- !!!!! Scrivener for Windows!!!!! It's coming soon!!!!



- Publishers Weekly on the "cop out" of dead parents in YA.

- Author Maggie Stiefvater explains the difference between a good idea and its good execution.

- Two great posts from author Janice Hardy this week: Tying up loose ends and writing what your readers don't know.

- Big Other wants to know your writing rituals.

- Quick and easy reference for word count by genre from Colleen Lindsay at the Swivet.

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- Author John Scalzi with one of this week's most popular blog posts, "Writing: Find the Time or Don't."
"Do you want to write or don’t you? If your answer is 'yes, but,' then here’s a small editing tip: what you’re doing is using six letters and two words to say 'no.' And that’s fine. Just don’t kid yourself as to what 'yes, but' means."





THIS WEEK IN READING

Photobucket - Important post from author Maureen Johnson on the "crisis" of boy books. 
“All I would ask you to consider is the fact that as a female writer, I was raised on a steady and unvaried diet of male writers. I read about impotence before I knew what menopause was.”
Photobucket - On a related note, The Wall Street Journal presents "How to Raise Boys That Read." (Hint: not with gross-out books and video game bribes.)


- Laura Miller at Salon examines whether a character has to be likeable.

- Our friend Elana Johnson reveals her beautiful cover!

- Why The Hunger Games is not the new Twilight. (Warning: The comments, at least when I read the article, are like something out of a 1996 AOL chatroom.)



THIS WEEK IN GETTING PUBLISHED

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- Author Kiersten White explains the O.B.S.E.S.S. method of professional waiting for writers.

- Do Twitter's Follow Fridays and Writer Wednesdays actually work? Author Jan O'Hara says no (and I totally agree).

- Querying? Don't compare your manuscript to the books mentioned in this article at Slate.

- Agent Rachelle Gardner offers eleven questions to help focus your pitch.

- Agent Mary Kole on resubmitting a revision.





THIS WEEK IN CONTESTS

Tons of giveaways associated with #speakloudly and Banned Books Week:

Also, don't forget that we're giving away copies of BLUE FIRE and A BLUE SO DARK!


THIS WEEK IN OTHER STUFF

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- Popwatch wants to know which YA books you think should become movies.


- Does your will have a provision for your library? Boston.com looks at lost libraries. (via BookNinja)

- Two great posts at Forever Young Adult this week: Keeping the Romance Alive and some alternate endings for Mockingjay.

- New blog Entropificus will illustrate outfits from the awesome "What Claudia Wore" blog.





THIS WEEK IN THE RANDOM

Something truly, truly random (via @molly_oneill)



Have a great weekend!

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THE REPLACEMENT was released this week. Don't pick it up unless you like creeptastical storytelling, beautiful writing and an overall vibe of the macabre. (Yeah, spoiler alert: I loved it.) But when you get back from the bookstore, check this out; Brenna Yovanoff was kind enough to answer a few questions for us! 
 
Mackie Doyle seems like everyone else in the perfect little town of Gentry, but he is living with a fatal secret – he is a Replacement, left in the crib of a human baby sixteen years ago. Now the creatures under the hill want him back, and Mackie must decide where he really belongs and what he really wants.

A month ago, Mackie might have told them to buzz off. But now, with a budding relationship with tough, wounded, beautiful Tate, Mackie has too much to lose. Will love finally make him worthy of the human world?
 
1. I have to start with a statement of the obvious: That is the coolest effing cover I've ever seen. What did you think when you first saw it?

Oh, wow—I thought, the cover gods have smiled on me! Seriously, I'm crazy about my cover. It is the perfect visual representation for this book and I still can't believe how great it turned out!

2. What creeps me out most in The Replacement is not the creatures beneath the town, but the attitude (or lack thereof) of the townspeople toward those creatures. Was this part of the original idea for the story when it came to you – the “ignorance is bliss” mentality – or did you discover it as you wrote?

Well, I did start with a little bit of that mentality in mind, but it definitely got much bigger as the story developed. I really wanted to do something spooky that evoked the whole Shirley Jackson vibe. The idea of a town where bad stuff happens and everyone's sort of okay with it has always seemed really creepy to me.

3. As a musician, I have to say the “on stage” scenes were some of my absolute favorites in the book. I sent my ARC along to a contest winner, but I'm pretty sure I remember an awesome description of a guitar riff sounding like a traffic jam in a blender. But what you really nailed was the emotions musicians experience during an intense performance. Have you been on stage as a musician/dancer/actor/juggler/contortionist before? Take part in any amateur nights for “research?”

That is indeed the line—I'm impressed that you remember! Time for a big confession: I have never performed at anything. I was in a couple of elementary-school plays where I sang with a whole bunch of other kids or recited poems, but I'm terrible at music and I'm not much of a public speaker or a thespian. I'm just glad the scenes seem to have some veracity, because I had to do a lot of imagining!

4. What was the query process like for you; was The Replacement pulled out of the slushpile?

My query process was pretty straightforward, and yep, I came right out of the slushpile. I wish the story were more glamorous, but it really just goes like this: I put in some time researching agents and picked a handful I thought would be a good fit for me. I worked really hard on my query letter and shined up those first five pages. Then I just closed my eyes and hit send and hoped for the best.

5. Congratulations are in order! The Lerner deal for The Merry Sisters of Fate is incredible, and the book sounds so unique; part anthology, part writing advice. Can you tell us a little bit about how the three of you got started as critique partners and a group blog, and how this book deal came about?

Okay, I'll try to be brief, but I make no promises! So, about three years ago (wow, has it really been that long?!), Maggie Stiefvater put out a call for critique partners and we just kind of clicked. Then, after reading each other's stuff a month or two, she put me in touch with Tess, who'd she'd also met through her call for crit partners. At that point, neither Tess nor I had agents, and Maggie was working on the book that would become Shiver, but it hadn't sold to Scholastic yet. She suggested that we post short fiction once a week as a way to push ourselves.

The anthology deal was something we'd talked about for a long time, but only in a very abstract way, like “wouldn't it be cool if . . .” Then last fall, we put together a submission package and our agents sent it out, and we are completely thrilled to be working with Andrew Karre at Carolrhoda (he used to be Maggie's editor at Flux and he's awesome)!

6. Every writer has a different path, but we can all use the occasional words of wisdom or inspiration. What's the piece of advice that's most helped you on your road to publication?

I'd have to say, knowing that publishing is not a lottery. It's not a crapshoot, it's not an odds game. It's an endurance sport, and as long as you can deal with that, you're going to be fine! (For real.)


Five Real Fast (answer quick without thinking!)

1. Two weeks of travel – how, where and why? Ferry from Italy to Corfu to live in a strawberry villa and find hedgehogs.

2. Ranch flavored ice cream or BBQ chicken cupcake? Ew, ew, ew . . . ::closes eyes and points:: Cupcake!

3. Favorite childhood author? Roald Dahl, definitely—I loved him fanatically.

Article of clothing you can't live without? Mittens!

What song was last stuck in your head? The truth? This really ridiculous song Maggie made up about a hoodie. No, I can't sing it, because I am tone-deaf. But trust me, it's catchy.


Thanks so much for having me, Michelle! 
 
Thank you, Brenna!

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Welcome to our 46th Road Trip Wednesday!

Road Trip Wednesday is a "Blog Carnival," where YA Highway's contributors post a weekly writing- or reading-related question and answer it on our own blogs. You can hop from destination to destination and get everybody's unique take on the topic.

We'd love for you to participate! Just answer the prompt on your own blog and leave a link in the comments - or, if you prefer, you can include your answer in the comments.

Road Trip Wednesday Special Feature! To celebrate how supportive you guys have been of RTW since it started, this week we're featuring your fab participant posts! The links you leave for us in the comments before 6:00pm CST will have their day in the (highly deserved) sun. If your post isn't highlighted, don't worry - we'll continue to highlight participants in future features!

This Week's Topic:
If you went to high school with your characters, would you be friends?


Pam Harris & Quita Hockaday: "I still want to tell certain people to shove it, but I digress..."

KT: "I think I'd actually be intimidated by him..."

Alicia Gregoire: "The short answer of 'no' has nothing to do with my characters as people..."

Sarah Nicolas: "I recently announced on Twitter that I’m kinda sorta in love with him..."

Katy Upperman: "I often tell my husband that if I’d known him in high school, we wouldn’t have been friends..."

Bri: "I love all of my characters dearly, but there are only three that I might have been friends with."

Aleeza: "Dude, this is a question I've asked myself numerous times before, because it's just SO MUCH FUN pondering over!"

Heather Howland: "Um… no."

Mariam Maarouf: "Mmm... that depends."

Holly Dodson: "Honestly, she's the kind of friend I wish I'd found when I was fourteen."

Kirsten Rice: "He's kind of out of my league."

Horserider: "We're both shy and we both love horses."

Road Trip Song of the Week:

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We're excited to present a guest post from Holly Schindler, author of Booklist-starred A BLUE SO DARK. Be sure to read through to find out how to win your own signed copy of A BLUE SO DARK!

About A BLUE SO DARK:
Fifteen-year-old Aura Ambrose has been hiding a secret. Her mother, a talented artist and art teacher, is slowly being consumed by schizophrenia, and Aura has been her sole caretaker ever since Aura's dad left them. Convinced that "creative" equals crazy, Aura shuns her own artistic talent. But as her mother sinks deeper into the darkness of mental illness, the hunger for a creative outlet draws Aura toward the depths of her imagination. Just as desperation threatens to swallow her whole, Aura discovers that art, love, and family are profoundly linked—and together may offer an escape from her fears.

by Holly Schindler


My debut novel, A BLUE SO DARK, was released last May to positive reviews…including a STARRED review in BOOKLIST! But three, four years ago? Those positive reviews seemed about as far away as the moon. My path to publication was a long and winding one.

I graduated with my master’s in the spring of ’01. A lifelong book nut, my ultimate dream was to write. So I jumped at the chance to take my mom up on her offer to feed me while I devoted full-time effort to my writing.

At the time, naĂŻve ol’ me, I figured, a year, year and a half tops, and I have a book written, and of COURSE it would sell right off…probably even be an auction…

Yeah. Sure. The reality? Seven and a half years. I’d write a manuscript, send it out. While I waited for response, I’d write another. While I waited, I’d write yet another…After a few years, I was in a constant cycle of writing new stuff, revising old manuscripts, and pitching my ideas to potential editors and agents.

In seven and a half years, I racked up the rejections. Hundreds of them. But what was actually the hardest to bear wasn’t really the number of rejections but the amount of time it was taking to get started. Friends I’d gone to college with were wrapping up PhDs, getting gigs as professors, and I was still just banging my head against the wall. All I really had to show for it was a stack of unpublished manuscripts that LITERALLY stretched from the floor to the ceiling of my office.

Along about 2006, though, I was really beginning to get GOOD rejections. Not just notes thanking me for submitting, but long-winded emails from editors or agents as to why my work hadn’t been accepted, and how she (or he) felt I could improve my book. I was even getting invitations to resubmit.

It’s REALLY easy, after years of don’t-call-me, we’ll-(never)-call-you messages, to think of an offer to resubmit as lip service. A bunch of bull to help an editor get you out of their inbox. But they MEAN it. Believe me, editors really are busy. (I’m in awe of everything my editor at Flux gets done. Seriously—complete awe.) Agents are just as busy. And if one of them has taken time out of their day to tell you what’s lacking in your manuscript, LISTEN. They’re not taking time to write because they think you stink. They’re taking time to write because they see potential in your work. It’s a compliment.

SEEING rejections as compliments is the key to getting a book deal. In all honesty, it’s how I got mine. I revised A BLUE SO DARK globally at least four times in two years. By the time I approached the acquisitions editor at Flux about the book, it was in shape to BE acquired.

The thing is, writing takes time. And not just the time it takes to type some words on a computer keyboard. It takes time to polish, to understand how to pitch, to know how to develop a story, to create memorable characters. If I hadn’t had all that time (really—seven and a half years of full-time effort! That’s a luxury most writers only dream of), I doubt I’d have a book on the shelves today. But if I’d tossed rejections in the trash, if I’d insisted I was always right, if I’d never been willing to recognize the flaws in my stuff, I still doubt I’d ever get a book on the shelf, even after FIFTY years.

Nobody’s born knowing how to write a book. So don’t assume you have a clue what you’re doing the first time you put your fingers to the keyboard. Know that it will take time—but keep your antennae out for those positive rejections! Good rejections will help you revise with purpose, and cut down on the amount of time it will take to GET to that first publication!

Learn more about Holly at hollyschindler.com and hollyschindler.blogspot.com.

Want to win your own copy of A BLUE SO DARK? Leave a comment on this post to enter. Each comment is worth one point. Add +1 point for tweeting this contest and +1 for linking to this on your blog or facebook, for a total of 3 possible entries. Add up your totals and leave them with your comment. Good luck!

Also, don't forget to enter Monday's contest for Janice Hardy's BLUE FIRE. It's BLUE BOOK WEEK at YA Highway!
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The summary from the back cover of the ARC:

Part fugitive, part hero, fifteen-year-old Nya is barely staying ahead of the Duke of Baseer's trackers. Wanted for a crime she didn't mean to commit, she risks capture to protect every Taker she can find, determined to prevent the Duke from using them in his fiendish experiments. But resolve isn't enough to protect any of them, and Nya soon realizes that the only way to keep them all out of the Duke's clutches is to flee Geveg. Unfortunately, the Duke's best tracker has other ideas.
Nya finds herself trapped in the last place she ever wanted to be, forced to trust the last people she ever thought she could. More is at stake than just the people of Geveg, and the closer she gets to uncovering the Duke's plan, the more she discovers how critical she is to his victory. To save Geveg, she just might have to save Baseer--if she doesn't destroy it first.


Since this is the second book in Janice Hardy's Healing Wars trilogy, my review is going to be a bit vague and brief, because if you haven't read book one, THE SHIFTER, well, I don't know what you're waiting for but regardless, I don't want to spoil you on that book if I can help it!

I adored THE SHIFTER, so I was really excited to get the ARC of BLUE FIRE. So excited that after we picked it up at the post office, I gave my fiancĂ© the evil eye when he put it in the backseat of the car and then explained how excited I was to have it, in great depth, the whole way home.

And it didn't disappoint. One of the best things about THE SHIFTER was the world building, and it was just as good in BLUE FIRE. It isn't easy to build an entire world from the ground up, incorporate a bit of magic, and make it totally believable. But this world feels not only believable, but real. The characters and their relationships continued to be wonderful in this second book. I love how Nya manages to be a fiery little thing while also maintaining some really good relationships. She knows that she can't always do everything alone, and isn't too proud to enlist others in helping her, but she's also scrappy and never gives up.

This book sees Nya having to make a lot of really difficult choices, especially with her world starting to get messy with war-like stuff (the trilogy is called the Healing WARS, after all...) and it's all handled so well. Vivid enough that you're getting the horrors of what it's like to be Nya in a bad situation right now, but subtle enough so as not to give a MG aged reader nightmares.

BLUE FIRE is a really strong follow-up to THE SHIFTER, and even if you aren't an avid fantasy reader, this trilogy is worth reading.

If you'd like to win a (signed!) ARC of BLUE FIRE, all you have to do is comment on this post. I'll give you +1 entry for tweeting about the contest, and +1 for blogging about it or linking it on your blog, if you link to your tweet and/or blog entry in the comments as well. Giveaway will close at midnight (eastern time) on Sunday, September 26th and I'll announce a winner the next morning. US/Canadian residents only for this one (sorry).

Visit author Holly Schindler's guest post for another opportunity to win a book. She's giving away a signed copy of her starred-novel, A BLUE SO DARK.
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Making Sentences Sing

There's a reason writers talk so much about music. A song can spark an idea for a novel, set the tone or mood for a book with its melody, or a single stanza can encompass the entire meaning of what their book represents. But there's another reason music and writing go hand-in-hand. Sentences, just like music, have a certain sound and rhythm. Writing technically correct sentences to guide a reader through your story is imperative, but how you write them is just as important.

Sound at Surface Level
The good news? Writers, even those working on their very first novel, already understand sound at the basic level. Writers are readers. We *hear* when a sentence doesn't sound quite right. Even if we aren't able to put our finger on it, we sense something is off. It could be a run on sentence or the particular space of a comma. While the sentence isn't incorrect, it isn't exactly pleasing to the ear, either.

Digging a little deeper
Here is what can separate good prose from great prose. Sound on a deeper level is more than a decent sentence. It involves paying close attention to each word and how it fits and moves in a sentence.

There was no sun; there was no light. I was dying. I couldn't remember what the sky looked like.
But I didn't die. I was lost to a sea of cold, and then I was reborn into a world of warmth.
I remember this: his yellow eyes.
I thought I'd never see them again.
    
--SHIVER by Maggie Stiefvater 

Let's break this beautiful writing down.
Punctuation
Punctuation serves as traffic signals in writing. It tells us where to stop, where to pause, and where to floor it. Look at the first sentence:
There was no sun; there was no light.
A semi-colon (in this instance) is used for connecting two independent clauses that, while related (no sun, no light), are distinct enough to need separation. A semi-colon reads much like a comma. There's a pause, a hesitation, before moving on to the next part. So why not use a period? A period marks the completion of a thought. Since the two clauses in the example are both building on the same thought, they don't need to be separate sentences.
  
Alliteration 
Alliteration is the repetition or matching of initial consonant sounds in neighboring words.
  
"then I was reborn into a world of warmth."
  
Alliteration is prominent in much of poetry. Many older writer's chose alliteration over rhyming. 
Mary sat musing on the lamp-flame at the table
Waiting for Warren. When she heard his step. . .

--from The Death of the Hired Man by Robert Frost

Alliteration can be taken a step further and produce echo.

Echo -- the repetition of words or phrase.
There was no sun; there was no light. I was dying. I couldn't remember what the sky looked like.
But I didn't die. I was lost to a sea of cold, and then I was reborn into a world of warmth.
Here we see the repetition of words forming an echo. Emphasis is placed on certain phrases the writer wants the reader to hear louder than the others.
*Be careful of unintentional echoes such as repeated character names, dialog tags, or thoughts. These emphasize unimportant things and will weigh your writing down.
Resonance
Resonance is, by literal definition, moving between two states or places. Ever heard someone strike a tuning fork? The note's volume isn't constant. It reverberates softer and louder. Good prose will do the same.

There was no sun; there was no light. I was dying. I couldn't remember what the sky looked like.
But I didn't die. I was lost to a sea of cold, and then I was reborn into a world of warmth.
  
There are two short sentences mixed between the three longer ones in this passage. The shorter sentences ring differently when read. The intention being to make important things stand out.

Resonance even extends to paragraph breaks.

There was no sun; there was no light. I was dying. I couldn't remember what the sky looked like.
But I didn't die. I was lost to a sea of cold, and then I was reborn into a world of warmth.

I remember this: his yellow eyes.

I thought I'd never see them again.

Separating a single sentence into a paragraph has the same resonating outcome as the different sentence lengths. It pulls a different kind of attention by its placement.
Crafting sentences in your story is just as important as plot and characters. All of these tools help writers to do more with words than simply make sentences. They help us make them sing. If you don't think you've developed an ear for these things just yet, the best thing to do is keep reading and, of course, writing.

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In this Saturday series, YA Highway writers share the query letters that landed their agents -- and why the queries worked, from the agents themselves. Next up...

Author Kaitlin Ward
&
Agent Elizabeth Jote of Objective Entertainment

from Kaitlin:

Query writing, for me, is stressful, to put it delicately. Succinctness is not one of my best skills. But somehow, I managed to pull together a query for this manuscript that my amazing query critiquers didn’t think needed too much work, so with a few tweaks, it was ready to go. It got a reasonable request rate, much better than the manuscript I’d queried unsuccessfully before it.

Liz called me without warning when she’d had the full for about three weeks, which was terrifying, but ultimately worked out better because the idea of waiting for a scheduled phone call gives me hives. She was easy to talk to, enthusiastic, and answered all my follow-up questions via email quickly and perfectly. A week later, she became my agent.


the query:
Sixteen-year-old Olivia Stern is dead—and loving it. Now that she’s over the initial shock, she’s basking in the perks of the Good District. Maybe a little too much. A series of bad choices earn her the ultimate punishment: a temporary return to the life she thought she was so over. Before she can even complain, she’s back in her comatose body, seeming like some kind of miracle.

Olivia misses the comforts of the Afterlife, but she doesn’t want to waste her second chance at living. Especially when she attracts the attention of sweet, slightly neurotic Grayson. She’s also determined to find out what happened the night she died. Which would probably be a lot easier if she could remember any of it.

In the meanwhile, Olivia realizes there are some major aspects of her personality that need fixing, too, like the selfish tendencies she picked up in the Afterlife. As things get more serious with Grayson, she wonders if she’s being fair to him. Her foray into life isn’t permanent, after all, and Grayson’s life is unraveling enough without adding a dead girlfriend to the mix. And when the pieces of her murder puzzle unveil a darker side to some of her loved ones, she starts to wonder if the truth is worse than knowing nothing at all.

from Elizabeth:
A girl who gets kicked out of the Afterlife for being a brat temporarily comes back to the land of the living, only to fall in love, become a better person, and solve the mystery of her death? Yes, please! First off, did you notice that I was able to summarize the entire premise so easily? That, ladies and gentleman, is the stuff good pitches are made of.

Kaitlin’s active voice and succinct manner of explaining the deceptively simple plot made her query stand out from the pack. More importantly, those brief paragraphs gave me a strong sense of the promise that Kaitlin had as a writer. Her query hinted at world-building, romance, mystery, a ticking clock to move the plot along, and quirky characters without overselling the emotional points. I was immediately intrigued , but the proof is always in the manuscript.

Because YA is so dependent on trends, it can be easy to fall into the clichĂ© ditch, which is why a strong teen voice is so vital to me. If an author has that, then nine times out of ten they won’t lead you, their premise, or their MC to a place everyone has already been. Kaitlin’s vision of the Afterlife was so distinctive that SO DEAD felt fresh to me. The dialogue was snappy, the characters were believable, and most of all no one ( not even Olivia) was perfect. Perfection of any sort is the knife that kills authentic teen characters. Characters that are too quirky can be murderous in the submission stage as well. Real people have highs and lows, and Kaitlin knew that. Kaitlin gave Olivia the greatest gift that any storyteller could give their characters; dimension. Olivia was a brat. She yelled, schemed and treated people badly, but I loved her anyway because at her core, she was good. She had a conscience and she acted on it. She had a true voice and heart, and that counts with me because both are things no edit note can ever give a writer. You can’t fake authenticity, someone has to come to that level of writing on their own through hard work.

I called Kaitlin after reading and gave my best pitch. When she agreed, I was thrilled and yapped about it all day ( much to the chagrin of my loved ones). When she sent me her WIP ideas, I was floored. We bounced ideas back and forth and she cherry picked the good ones. That kind of sense of self is very appealing to me as an agent because I prefer to agent like a cabbie ; you tell me where you want to go and I’ll decide the best route to get there. Kaitlin is very focused on where she wants to go as a writer, and what she would like to give to her eventual readership. I’m just happy to be along for the ride.


Want to query Elizabeth Jote? Guidelines can be found on her agentquery page.

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Field Trip Friday: September 17

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THIS WEEK IN WRITING

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- Don't have time to write? Yes you do. You're never as busy as you think you are. Mandy Hubbard describes how she finds the time. She also shares some editorial notes from her own books, and says "Don't get it right. Just get it written."

- Author Janice Hardy breaks down point of view.

- Find out how to hook readers with your first chapter, from author Beth Revis-- and be sure to check out her first chapter, because the woman knows what she's talking about.

- Hate word verification on blogs? Author Casey McCormick has a good suggestion for putting those jumbles of letters to use.

- Slate asks: "Can a woman be a great American novelist?" Especially interesting to read in conjunction with a Twitter conversation earlier this week between Ally Carter, Maureen Johnson, John Green and several other YA authors, lamenting the curse of the "chick lit pink cover" and its effect on literary awards.

- The HuffPo features 41 writers OVER 40.

- Oh that we all had the chance to retreat and go feral. (No really, it's a delightful little article.)


THIS WEEK IN READING




- The Frenemy at the HuffPo presents "The Babysitter's Club: Where Are They Now?"  
Does anyone remember Claudia's dorky sister Janine, who stood in the hallway looking at their sign, pondering whether "Babysitter's Club" needed an apostrophe? Does that question still bother anyone else? No? Just me? Okay then. Nothing to see here.





THIS WEEK IN GETTING PUBLISHED

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- Author Maggie Stiefvater on courageous querying.

- Agent Jennifer Laughran explains the terms front-, mid- and backlist.

- Author Natalie Whipple with seven ways to make your blog more readable.

- Lovely post from FinePrint assistant Meredith Barnes about pub love.


- The Perils of Social Networking by agent Suzie Townsend. 

- Ten things debut authors should know about signings, from author Mary Robinette Kowal. (via Cleolinda Jones)


THIS WEEK IN OTHER STUFF

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- The Hunger Games movies may have a director: Gary Ross, director of "Seabiscuit" and "Pleasantville." Pretty sure Pleasantville and the Capitol couldn't be further apart.

- Congratulations to Ally Condie, whose MATCHED trilogy will be brought to film by Disney and Offspring Entertainment!


- Fair warning about dating a writer.


THIS WEEK IN CONTESTS


- CONGRATULATIONS TO RIV RE, who won our Personal Demons contest? Please email yahighway at gmail dot com so we can get your prize to you asap!


THIS WEEK IN THE RANDOM

Lady Gaga's "Bad Romance" played on the Iowa State University carillon (via @ColleenLindsay)


OMG- Myra McEntire found the Redneck Vampires I was looking for! You can also win an ARC of her book HOURGLASS if you click on her name! (And hey, while I'm linking to myself: If you want more random during the week, I started a Tumblr for just that. It won't all be sparkly Twilight gifs... although I'm sure there will be a few.)


Happy Friday!


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The Contemps [Over]Share: Do-Over Days!

I helped put together the very first [over]share video for The Contemps, the group of 21 contemporary young adult authors Kody Keplinger and I are a part of. Watch the vid, then head on over to The Contemps and share what day you'd do over from your teenage years!



And while I have your attention... I'm hosting my very first (signed!) Like Mandarin ARC giveaway at my blog. I'm also giving away query/page critiques and signed bookmarks. Come enter, it'll make me so happy! And stay tuned for a second Like Mandarin ARC giveaway right here on YA Highway in the next few weeks.
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Welcome to our 45th Road Trip Wednesday!

Road Trip Wednesday is a "Blog Carnival," where YA Highway's contributors post a weekly writing- or reading-related question and answer it on our own blogs. You can hop from destination to destination and get everybody's unique take on the topic.

We'd love for you to participate! Just answer the prompt on your own blog and leave a link in the comments - or, if you prefer, you can include your answer in the comments.

This Week's Topic:
If you could travel back to any historical era for research purposes, which would you choose?

Emilia: "Man, it's mega cliche: 21st century youth idealizes a time when thangs went down...."

Kate: "In college, I managed to make almost every single paper relate to Indian issues..."

Kirsten: "I guess you could put me anywhere, among anyone, at any time, and that's where I'd hope to find a story..."

Amanda: "It seemed like a rather peaceful time, not a lot of plagues going on."

Michelle: "Maybe a few days before the fire, just to hang out in a corset and bust through some saloon batwing doors..."


Kaitlin: "I know the plagues should turn me off..."

Kristin: "I'd time machine hitchhike to Haight-Ashbury for that in a heartbeat . . ."


Road Trip Song of the Week:
"Once in a Lifetime" by Talking Heads

Next Week's Topic:
If you went to school with your characters, would you be friends?

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